i think you draw a good number of your forms very boxy and static. trying moving the shoulders and hips about a little more. IN a drawing class I had the teacher had us watch how people move and try and do just simple sketches and stick figures to try and show that movement. It's a good exercise.
as a photographer- I feel the lighting on the lower legs and dress seem a bit awkward giving her the impression that her hips are sunken in backwards and flat.
However!! I love your coloring and texturing as well as your intricate detail work. I also really rather like her outfit design
As always the detail you put into this piece is wonderful. From the flowy clothing to the elegant jewelry, you never cease to amaze me. Her expression and pose give the feeling that she is optimistic and determined, as if she is setting forth on some grand adventure. Lovely.